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On the seventh day God rested and he blessed the world he had created,
He was content with his world and saw that it was good.

On the sixth day God created human beings
He provided them with knowledge and free will of his planet.
Then they settled their differences with swords
And he saw that his creation was corrupt.

On the fifth day God created creatures of the sky and the sea
And saw that human hunted them for fun
Breaking apart their homes with their wars and gun powder
Abusing their rights as creatures of the earth
And he saw that his world was dieing.

On the fourth day God created day and night
Humans used this to attack in the darkness
Sneak up on each other and slit throats
To thieve
To kill
To murder
And God saw that his humans were changing.

On the third day God created land
And it was divided by the humans.
They produced more fighting
They spread wars across the world,
Across trenches
And in the peaceful green
His vegetation also created that day,
Trampled by the fire and feet of man.

On the second day God separated the waters to create sky
To place a barrier between him and the creations who believed in him no more.
The creations that turned their backs to the world he had given
He separated their relationship, their bond with a barrier.

Finally on the first day God said 'let there be light' and there was light
The light of a thousand atom bombs
Spreading their death across the globe
The human race wiping themselves out
Then there was nothing
No shape
No form
Only blackness
And God saw this was good.
Reuploaded for Alfie :icongazing-eye:
SOOO, basically I was in RE and doing the story and came up with this. Sorry if it offends. Ps. God thinks it's good because humans aren't bothering him any more and he was sad with them.
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:iconpsyhopanda:
VERY NICE,you have talent
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:iconpsyhopanda:
VERY NICE. you have some talent
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Realitea Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconnesii-fenlon:
I really like this, you're amazing at writing- seriously. I like the concept too :)
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Realitea Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Ness :)
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:icongazing-eye:
Wow, that was a really interesting take on the the creation story. :aww:
I really liked how it depicts what is slowly happening to our world, and although I'm not religious I like the concept of God's creations slipping from his control.
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Realitea Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, sorry for deleting when you was commenting :')
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